tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9883406.post110529558676163205..comments2023-03-30T03:35:27.658-06:00Comments on Small Branches Poetry: The Semester Dawns & AestheticsAmy D. Unsworthhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01925848150845373759noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9883406.post-1105317034978991602005-01-09T17:30:00.000-07:002005-01-09T17:30:00.000-07:00(Sorry about all the deleted posts; they really ne...(Sorry about all the deleted posts; they really need to allow editing of comments for when one makes some silly error.)<br /><br />About _The Restored Ariel_: This is actually the text that I spent a lot of time with. I found that the order that Plath intended indicates a much more hopeful outlook than many critics have argued. Especially since the book ends with the bee keeper poems. <br /><br />excerpt from my paper:<br /><br />"The last few poems in the restored edition are the bee keeping poems. These final poems point to an arc of the book which would end with spring. What is important to see in these poems is that the speaker identifies with the queen bee that is cold and alone in the meadow. In the poem “Stings” we see perhaps the most telling line of the collection. The speaker states, “They thought death was worth it, but / I have a self to recover, a queen” (51-52). This queen lives and flies above the “mausoleum” created by the rival and the “wax house” of depression (60). The speaker in “The Arrival of The Bee Box” recognizes that the “box is only temporary” (36). The constraint and the pain are only temporary. <br /><br />In the final poem of Plath’s manuscript, the speaker sees herself again as the queen bee. She speaks of the “Maids and the long royal lady. / They have got rid of the men” (39-40). And while the speaker and the queen bee are “in the cold and too dumb to think,” they are still “flying” and “They taste the spring” (45, 50). These lines would suggest that the speaker still hopes to recover from the depression and the heartache and still has the ability to look towards a life beyond the sorrow."<br /><br />One can only guess, but the original order creates a manuscript much different in tone than the version that Ted Hughes released after her death. You'll note that "Edge" which is the second to last poem in the early version was not included in the orignial manuscript or the "Restored" version. <br /><br />Best,<br />AmyAmy D. Unsworthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01925848150845373759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9883406.post-1105307987656815672005-01-09T14:59:00.000-07:002005-01-09T14:59:00.000-07:00Any hints on how to make the line breaks stay wher...Any hints on how to make the line breaks stay where they belong? In the preview window the poem looked fine & now not.Amy D. Unsworthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01925848150845373759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9883406.post-1105307796121939442005-01-09T14:56:00.000-07:002005-01-09T14:56:00.000-07:00I already have a lot of respect for the quietness ...I already have a lot of respect for the quietness of Kenyon's writing. I think as of now this is my favorite of her poems:<br /><br /><B>Apple Dropping into Deep Early Snow</B>A jay settled on a branch, making it sway.<br />The one shrivled fruit that remained<br />gave way to the deepening drift below.<br />I happened to see it the moment it fell.<br /><br />Dusk is eager and comes early. A car<br />creeps over the hill. Still in the dark I try<br />to tell if I am numbered with the damned,<br />who cry, outraged, <EM>Lord when did we see You?</EM>--Jane Kenyon from <EM>Otherwise: New and Selected Poems</EM>Amy D. Unsworthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01925848150845373759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9883406.post-1105307757588624122005-01-09T14:55:00.000-07:002005-01-09T14:55:00.000-07:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Amy D. Unsworthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01925848150845373759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9883406.post-1105307684347234042005-01-09T14:54:00.000-07:002005-01-09T14:54:00.000-07:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Amy D. Unsworthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01925848150845373759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9883406.post-1105306476006781802005-01-09T14:34:00.000-07:002005-01-09T14:34:00.000-07:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.Amy D. Unsworthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01925848150845373759noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9883406.post-1105304070028586572005-01-09T13:54:00.000-07:002005-01-09T13:54:00.000-07:00Good luck with the new semester. You'll love Jane ...Good luck with the new semester. You'll love Jane Kenyon. I got your site off Sharon's Watermark<br /><br />Cathy http://quietpoet.blogs.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9883406.post-1105297468370489182005-01-09T12:04:00.000-07:002005-01-09T12:04:00.000-07:00Good luck w/Stephen Dunn--certainly an interesting...Good luck w/Stephen Dunn--certainly an interesting poet. Just began Plath's _Ariel_ w/Frieda's intro. Hard to & not to graph one's own motherhood on to such a text, 'eh? Did you find it mostly autobiography??SquirrleyMojohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07506123885434308454noreply@blogger.com